SHORT FILM: I MISS YOU

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I MISS YOU BY UYI OMORUYI

Uyi sent me a link to this short film to review am guessing he was hoping for my tatafo version of this short film. Before I tatafo check it out:



First of all i think it is a very sad short film i guess that is the point. I thought the lighting was well done. I have a problem with the crying shot when it is a close up and her face is cut in the middle, it takes away from the moment I think you are trying to establish.

Her pregnancy wasn't bad at all I appreciated the hard work. The voice reading the monologues wasnt that intriguing it did not draw me in, there was too much effort in sounding seductive? not sure that is the word, i did not feel like being happy, or crying with the character. I loved the ending of the film it was expected but you are still shocked when you see it. I really liked it.

Generally I think it was well told visually, just a few improvement here and there.
I will give is a    6/10

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  1. Yay! Thanks for the score. Those are difinitely wise words that would be taken into consideration on the next storytelling visual...

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